Sunday, 29 December 2019

S L J

Hello everybody, I'm sorry for getting my days wrong so tomorrow I will be going on week 2 if you can, can someone tell me what week i'm meant to be on because I think that iv'e been doing my days wrong. Any way welcome back to another activate right now i'm going to be doing activity 2 so i'm going to be writing a story, a short story that I want to spread around the world. oh ya I going to give my self a little catchphrase that I'm going to be using on my blog for the begging, its going to be
"LETS GET BLOGGING" but really Let start.

My story is going to be called
Mind control
Once upon a time there was a boy called tom he was 10 years old and he was home schooled. He always thinks that one day he will have powers to move things with his mind. he lived a happy life so far. A few years later he was sent to a camp and he went. Their where bully's everywhere they would teas him for not going to school. they would make him so angry that one day he moved something.
with his mind, he smash something into the floor. He work on his powers when he found out about them. He stared bullying the bully's  by throwing them across the room. later on he was called a bully.
he could use his powers on anything. Another few years later he used his powers safely.

Thank you for reading this blog post, I hoped you enjoyed make sure to comment down below if i'm getting my days wrong, and also if you want can you give me some feedback about my writing so I can make it easier or more fun to read  blog ya later.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Genevieve,

    My name is Hazel and I am part of the SLJ team that will be reading and commenting on your blog posts this summer. I love your catchphrase!

    I really enjoyed reading your story about Tom, and I am so glad that he eventually started using his powers safely. Even though he was being bullied, it wouldn't be very nice if Tom turned into a bully himself.

    Do you often write your own stories? I think writing is a great creative outlet, and it sounds as though you have lots of interesting ideas that you could use!

    Keep up the great mahi, and I look forward to reading more of your posts soon.

    Hazel :)

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    2. Also I do write my own stories often.

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